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Comment 1. November 16, 2007
Story: Ouch by Ikarus Onesun
Hmm, a debriefing of the events of episode 11 and nobody wants to be there. Surprise. Glad you didn't stretch yourself.
Shinji gets a paper cut and runs around like a small child trying to get someone to fix it? This from a guy who took 2 hits to the face from Touji, felt his 'arm' broken and his 'head' pierced in his first battle on Unit 1, felt the teeth of the sixth Angel 'biting' into him, felt the heat from a volcano when he dove in and saved Asuka, ect.ect. And he runs around like a crying three year old.
I'm sure glad you got his characterization correct!
Not just his, others as well: Misato taking her anger for Kaji out on Shinji, threatening his life if he ever turned out like Kaji. Rei kissing his boo-boo?
Awwwww.....
Technically okay, plot-wise boring, slighty OOC. Use a little imagination next time. 
 
Comment 2. October 8, 2007
Story: The Sword of Light by Lord Talon
I think I have the formatting problem fixed, I need to work on the italics next.
Comment 3. September 17, 2007
Story: The Sword of Light by Lord Talon
I've tried to fix this thing four or five times, and it still doesn't work for me! Grrr!
Comment 4. July 11, 2007
Story: Uncommon Law by Random1377
Bwahahahahahahahah! Lord, I haven't laughed this much in a long time! Great job!
Comment 5. July 1, 2007
Story: A Perfect Woman by Random1377
Great story, very nice twist at the end! I was laughiing my tale off and getting strange looks from my wife, something about 'laughing like a maniac'. Good job, my friend!
Comment 6. July 1, 2007
Story: Under The Gun by Fifth Horseman
Bwahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! I loved it! The idea of Shinji being held hostage was good, but it turning out to be a paintball game was absolute genius! Well played, my friend! Strawberry sauce, indeed!
 

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