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Comment 1. June 28, 2008
Story: Broken Devil by Fifth Horseman
A very good slice-of-life story about Shinji and Asuka.  Again, characterization and scene description were top-notch.  This Author has a knack for bringing the audience into the story and holding them there.
Another fine story which will be burned onto my hard drive.
Thank you for my time well spent.
Riko Ozaki
Comment 2. June 27, 2008
Story: Words by Fifth Horseman
Very poignant and descriptive prose.  Asuka and Rei well-treated in this story.  Shinji having some fortitude at this point is well done.  They have grown, as you have shown, and it is a wonderful picture you have painted.
Those of you who have not perused this Author's works:
There are a few better, but many worse.
Give him a shot.  What do you have to lose?
Maybe some moments of boredom and ennui.
Thank you, Fifth Horseman.
 
Riko Ozaki 
 

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