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"Long Time No See"
By JimmyWolk
Genres: General, Humor

Comment 1. February 14, 2008 | Posted By: illogically.inclined
Completely epic win, just like the rest of your stuff. You seriously had me going until the end, much in the same way as that classic of the WAFF-deception genre, The Best Laid Plans.
Keep up the oneshots, or better yet, don't, and work on 2nd Try.
Comment 2. May 23, 2007 | Posted By:
Still one of the better and sneaky Post series one shots!

The only onther thing is I'd lOVE to see Asuka and Shinji as she gives birth!

I know I've written one myself but I want to see what your take is especially connected to this storyline!

dennisud
Comment 3. October 10, 2006 | Posted By:
Nice work, awesome. Had me to the end!
Comment 4. June 17, 2006 | Posted By:
If you really love me you'll get to work on 2nd Try.
Comment 5. June 15, 2006 | Posted By:
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I love you, Lev. ;P
Comment 6. June 15, 2006 | Posted By:
RE-TARD-ED

And here I got to thinking it would turn out to be some sappy love story that ends in complete tragety whith them splitting up with their partners only for it to not work out between them, and then they end up killing each other or something. Then you went and threw in that zinger. Not cool man, its not cool to fuck with people like that. Its like telling someone you love them, then turning around and stabbing them in the face with a pen or something.

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