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By Fifth Horseman
Genres: Angst, Romance

Comment 1. June 27, 2008 | Posted By: Riko Ozaki
Very poignant and descriptive prose.  Asuka and Rei well-treated in this story.  Shinji having some fortitude at this point is well done.  They have grown, as you have shown, and it is a wonderful picture you have painted.
Those of you who have not perused this Author's works:
There are a few better, but many worse.
Give him a shot.  What do you have to lose?
Maybe some moments of boredom and ennui.
Thank you, Fifth Horseman.
 
Riko Ozaki 

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