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Broken Devil
By Fifth Horseman
Genres: Hurt/Comfort, N/A

Comment 1. June 28, 2008 | Posted By: Riko Ozaki
A very good slice-of-life story about Shinji and Asuka.  Again, characterization and scene description were top-notch.  This Author has a knack for bringing the audience into the story and holding them there.
Another fine story which will be burned onto my hard drive.
Thank you for my time well spent.
Riko Ozaki
Comment 2. January 12, 2008 | Posted By:
All i can say is well written. I have read 3 different Fan-fics based around the same tiem frame, post third impact, and all three have been different, this is the 4th, and It is different aswell. I look forward to more Chapters.

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