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Taking Sights
By Lavanya Six
Genres: General, Drama

Comment 1. July 28, 2008 | Posted By:
And then, once in a great while, shit just occurs to people.
Seriously bad-ass work. This is rapidly becoming one of my favorite pieces in a LONG while.
Comment 2. June 19, 2008 | Posted By: DarthYoshi
...I can understand Yui being around for the heat death of the universe, but why Asuka? How?
Comment 3. May 7, 2008 | Posted By: illogically.inclined
Well, you had me hooked, right up until you introduced Sadamoto-Brand Asuka-In-Appearance-Only Deluxe Bitch Edition.
Your interpretation of Gendo was excellent (you had a nice twist to it, and I have to say you justified everything expertly); your Fuyutsuki was brilliantly done; your Shinji was acceptable (a bit generic, but whatever).
I started to notice problems around the time you introduced Rei: she came out completely emotionless, a version I can not say I am a fan of.
Similarly, I am a complete bitch about the interpretation of Asuka, and yours rubbed me the wrong way almost as much as Adam Kadmon's.

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