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Shinji the Mighty
By Mike313
Genres: Adventure, Crossover

Comment 1. June 8, 2009 | Posted By: tu | Report Abuse | Report Spam
This was in chapter 16 , when Revi is about to take Gendo's Seed of Life: 
" Gendo raised her arms in a defensive gesture "
Comment 2. May 13, 2009 | Posted By: Zoro50 | Report Abuse | Report Spam
Nive work Mike, i'll leave my full review on FFN a bit later
Comment 3. March 23, 2009 | Posted By: Jmb | Report Abuse | Report Spam
the formating is bad. the letters are black and the background is black too.

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